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5442. NuPlanetOne - 4/7/2005 7:43:47 PM



Hope

It is not so much the promise of spring
As it is the anticipation, the idea, the relief
The brief forgetting, the flowering, the swing
Of emotions toward forgiving, toward
Renewed expectations of betterment; to sing
To dance, to capture a chance, a moment of love
Of leisure, to imagine as if in a seizure or fit
Of joy you could again run and chase the sun
Because the promise is only that, an out held hand
An opportunity, an excuse to finish, to be done
With the silent cold and its withering hold, with
The darkening mold that collects at its corners
In the basement of a season, and with good reason
You smile, and welcome the touch, the lifting
The coming out, that what it is all..all about
Is hope.

5443. webfeet - 4/8/2005 4:02:59 AM

Yes dear nuplanet, but April is still the cruellest month.

5444. NuPlanetOne - 4/9/2005 5:44:20 AM


..webfeet. I don’t know, I’ve always liked april. March, more so for me always seemed more aggravating. But having read ‘the actual state of things’, if that all happened in april…I can see your point. I won’t even start to examine in a Freudian way the implications of the interrupted dream. But aside from identifying with the poem..there was good humor in its unfolding. Actually…it’s the kind of humor that is so good long after the fact. Course…there’s the gritty underlay as well

5445. Ulgine Barrows - 5/5/2005 8:10:58 AM

Do you wanna get heavy?

5446. Ulgine Barrows - 5/5/2005 8:22:44 AM

slaps forehead, advances to $million dollars



you guys, take it. I can't deal. Use id #99999.

5447. Ulgine Barrows - 5/5/2005 8:25:26 AM

Please.
Report back here.


I am so jazzed not ewwww, tell me why!

5448. Ulgine Barrows - 5/5/2005 8:31:39 AM

Also.

I did not do Cellar.


4948. Cellar Door - 3/21/2003 6:54:16 AM

Harold Pinter

I love you all for keeping my bro sane, good vibes on out

5449. Ulgine Barrows - 5/5/2005 8:32:49 AM

Mistake, no fixie from me.

Sorry.

5450. Ulgine Barrows - 5/5/2005 8:39:59 AM

Apparently I am confused----


U get wht U gv

5451. Ulgine Barrows - 5/6/2005 7:02:55 AM

That was strange, but you can all carry on, especially Harold.

5452. Ulgine Barrows - 5/6/2005 9:18:14 AM

My guitar is gently sleeping.


Also it'z turning.

5453. Ulgine Barrows - 5/6/2005 9:20:28 AM

There were some posts that git deleted.....

5454. Ulgine Barrows - 5/6/2005 9:28:52 AM

O fuck.. silly girl it's out of control....sunken eyes can't see

I'd give you everything I got for a little piece of mind!

5455. Ulgine Barrows - 5/6/2005 9:41:11 AM

monkey in soul

5456. alistairconnor - 5/6/2005 10:46:15 AM

Rubber soul sister?

5457. Macnas - 5/6/2005 11:00:03 AM

Everybodys got something to hide, 'cept for me and my sister.

5458. wonkers2 - 5/6/2005 12:43:20 PM

150th anniversary of "Leaves of Grass" Here.

5459. Ulgine Barrows - 5/12/2005 8:18:55 AM

Postamble for tab instead of carriage return.

5297. ElliottRW, I was reading The Good Nanny by Benjamin Cheever tonite.

Each last sentence is title of the chapter, BTW, in that book.

For instance, the title of the chapter is "Thank God you didn't go into medicine".
And that would be about the last line in that cahpter.

An excerpt from :

"So much depends upon a red necktie," Stuart said, "covered with wheelbarrows" He went into the bathroom, shut the door, switched on a light.

The comment was interesting because earlier in the book, there was a discourse about one mixing up what one had seen in TV, movies, print, as one own's experience.

5460. Ulgine Barrows - 5/12/2005 8:24:28 AM

Hope you can all decipher that, since I can't edit.


Basically, some Cheever author stole a line, and I would never have known if it weren't for you swabs at the Mote.

I wouldn't condemn the whole book - it was good- but.
Reeked of plagarism, when I read that line after reading here.

5461. Ulgine Barrows - 5/12/2005 8:26:59 AM

But I must be mixed up with TV, movies, print.

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