Welcome to the Mote!  

Poetry

Host: RickNelson

Are you a newbie?
Get an attitude.

Jump right in!

Mote Members: Log in Home
Post

Go to first message Go back 20 messages Messages 5313 - 5332 out of 6163 Go forward 20 messages Go to most recent message
5313. NuPlanetOne - 9/23/2004 7:21:00 PM




Elliott I too somehow feel that unrhymed poetry is somewhat less poetic in a sense than rhymed verse. But I am getting over that. I mostly write some rhyme scheme into my stuff, but I also have written things I liked without rhyming. And it may be that the bulk of poetry is unrhymed. Anyone got stats? Anyway, thanks rick for comparing me to anyone, especially when I come out on top..lol.

5314. NuPlanetOne - 9/23/2004 7:21:28 PM

/
/
Watching and Wishing

Boy! This TV really makes it all
Looked so connected
Like we are all together
Like we were all collected
And put here on a stage
Oh, not to strut in rage
In some melodramatic soliloquy
Demanding to know what will I be
But placed and spaced
Into far reaching corners
That once in days gone by
No one would even try
To get to. Even if they would let you
They simply didn’t exist
Because they were so far away
Fifty miles was enough to enlist
Help and special planning
Yet now I sit and watch
People in conflict beyond the hill
Beyond the ocean, the mountains
With no messenger to kill
Strangers with a holy will
To destroy all that disagree
There’s no hiding or abiding
By rules. No one is denying
No one is even trying to evade
Or mollify their intentions
And it is disturbing, unnerving
It feels like I am swerving
To avoid a catastrophe
And it ruins my day
Upsets my week-ends
Interrupts my dinner and
I fear I will grow thinner
And anxious and I hope
Soon, they will declare a winner
When I tune in later
And see those people far away
I wish they could say
They are gone.

5315. Ulgine Barrows - 9/24/2004 7:09:28 AM

5313. NuPlanetOne....
And it may be that the bulk of poetry is unrhymed. Anyone got stats?

Whyever would you want stats, crazy person?
Numbers don't matter in poetry.....it's all about words.....

You're fine, we like reading.

5316. Macnas - 10/1/2004 8:29:46 AM

Now, I'm not a big fan of Heaney, but as he's been mentioned in the Cafe and I can't recall seeing his work here before, I'll post my favourite of his.

Harvest Bow.

As you plaited the harvest bow
You implicated the mellowed silence in you
In wheat that does not rust
But brightens as it tightens twist by twist
Into a knowable corona,
A throwaway love-knot of straw.

Hands that aged round ashplants and cane sticks
And lapped the spurs on a lifetime of game cocks
Harked to their gift and worked with fine intent
Until your fingers moved somnambulant:
I tell and finger it like braille,
Gleaning the unsaid off the palpable,

And if I spy into its golden loops
I see us walk between the railway slopes
Into an evening of long grass and midges,
Blue smoke straight up, old beds and ploughs in hedges,
An auction notice on an outhouse wall--
You with a harvest bow in your lapel,

Me with the fishing rod, already homesick
For the big lift of these evenings, as your stick
Whacking the tips off weeds and bushes
Beats out of time, and beats, but flushes
Nothing: that original townland
Still tongue-tied in the straw tied by your hand.

The end of art is peace
Could be the motto of this frail device
That I have pinned up on our deal dresser--
Like a drawn snare
Slipped lately by the spirit of the corn
Yet burnished by its passage, and still warm.

5317. Ulgine Barrows - 10/1/2004 9:12:13 AM

Well, don't I just love that phrase......

But brightens as it tightens twist by twist

It's super!

5318. alistairconnor - 10/1/2004 9:30:15 AM

That whole first verse, a universal image of autumn, stands alone very well.
It sounds well in my mind, but it looks well on the page too : It goes beyond alliteration : the repeated w's : twist knowable throwaway straw : hypnotic plaiting pattern.

The rest is rest is more local, cultural, personal: harder work.

5319. Macnas - 10/1/2004 9:47:20 AM

I suppose that's why I like it, and probably why I prefer Irish poetry more than any other.

In the above poem, he is very close in style and content to Paddy Kavanagh.

5320. Macnas - 10/1/2004 9:48:48 AM

This last is my other favourite, for similar reasons.

Personal Helicon

As a child, they could not keep me from wells
And old pumps with buckets and windlasses.
I loved the dark drop, the trapped sky, the smells
Of waterweed, fungus and dank moss.


One, in a brickyard, with a rotted board top.
I savoured the rich crash when a bucket
Plummeted down at the end of a rope.
So deep you saw no reflection in it.


A shallow one under a dry stone ditch
Fructified like any aquarium.
When you dragged out long roots from the soft mulch
A white face hovered over the bottom.


Others had echoes, gave back your own call
With a clean new music in it. And one
Was scaresome, for there, out of ferns and tall
Foxgloves, a rat slapped across my reflection.


Now, to pry into roots, to finger slime,
To stare, big-eyed Narcissus, into some spring
Is beneath all adult dignity. I rhyme
To see myself, to set the darkness echoing.

5321. alistairconnor - 10/1/2004 10:12:51 AM

There are universal reasons for liking Irish poetry above other English language traditions. The shape of the language, the music of it, and the manner of telling a tale (tired clichés!).

So much poetry in English is abrupt or stuffy.

5322. NuPlanetOne - 10/2/2004 5:10:45 AM

\

Alistaire/

There is no doubting the innate charm of English in the throat of the Irish. And as a son of Claire Ellen Mc******, I sat many times at the foot of my maternal grandmother and marveled at the tales she would spin and embellish from her childhood in County Cork. But I can’t wholeheartedly agree that the poets on the bigger island were any less gifted or musical or in violation of cliché-ism as the poets on the smaller isle. Stuffy and abrupt sounds more like the stereotype than the fair due deserving of their use of the English language. That being said, I feel the place the vernacular English we simple poets attempt to twist into verse here in the colonies, is on par with any English I’ve heard spoken or scribbled anywhere. That is, if I may mildly disagree.

5323. Bill Russell - 10/2/2004 11:39:47 AM

I pledge allegiance

to the United States of

Halliburton, Inc.

.........................................................


What Roves the hallways

of the Bush America?

Some say it's treason.

.............................................................


YOU ARE EITHER WITH

deficit rich guy tax breaks

US, OR AGAINST US.

.........................................................


Please watch what you say.

Patriots don't criticize

The Republicans.

........................................................


New attacks each day.

Over one hundred more dead.

Mission Accomplished?

..........................................................

There should be limits

To freedom, he said. And now,

We see he meant it.



5324. Bill Russell - 10/3/2004 1:28:12 PM

The above is haiku of course.

5325. arkymalarky - 10/3/2004 5:59:08 PM

Thought so. I like it.

5326. Ulgine Barrows - 10/9/2004 6:45:33 AM

I don't know where my soul is, I don't know where my home is

-Nelly Furtado

5327. angel-five - 10/9/2004 4:09:19 PM

Still partly asleep
with the concrete balcony
sucking warmth from my bare feet.
Rich latte lips
wrap around my cigarette.
Traffic sussurus
roars out on the asphalt reef.
A bathrobe haiku
seldom obeys many rules.
So stop counting beats.

5328. angel-five - 10/9/2004 4:26:26 PM

Sprawled on a futon
Unfolded human laundry
still wrinkled from sleep.

Steel beasts honking
Poisonous idiot geese.
I need a chain gun.

Goddamned fucking cars
will not be fucking quiet.
My phone keeps beeping.

Can't you damn people
sleep in on a Saturday?
This world needs a gag.

Pundits rattling
their bone boxes on TV
Soporific sheep.

Where are my CDs?
Woman moves everything places
and doesn't tell me.

Good thing I love her.
Bathrobe Haiku finds nature
in some strange places



5329. marjoribanks - 10/9/2004 5:10:20 PM

Nice, Res, very evocative and pure.

5330. RickNelson - 10/12/2004 4:16:18 PM

I used to connect to Saturday morning sleep. It's a waste of good day to me now.

I agree with marj.


I've worked on this latest and I'm sorta Ok with it. The end or it's line work aren't exactly what I want. It's the idea of working wood and it's smooth sensual properties I entertain. Yeah, that's it.


Sensual:


I fashion something with my hands.
Say, the finest balusters in a mansion.
And the finial at the landing turns;
are orb top acorns fuller than
A large breast. Morning Glory vine carvings …

actually

Someone’s attention would
not be enough. I know the thought,
to make more, and perhaps elaborate
works I entertain. Day or night
my hands labor, to seek a sensuous
curve of wood…


I consume my imagination.

5331. angel-five - 10/12/2004 6:22:35 PM

alpha, omega
your mother's a beta
and she's got a better
beard than your dad


delta, zeta
your sister was made to
prop up a street light
and bob on my knob

gamma, theta,
there's just no way that
I'm not gonna beat up
your republican cousin

phi psi rho eta
fraternity hazing
let's bong some vodka
and pass out on the lawn.

5332. NuPlanetOne - 10/14/2004 8:32:57 PM

My New England Bones

You know the sound. It’s not the whoosh
and folding of the leaves that billow with
the wind. That move in a big way from
just a whisper of a breath of air and wave
happily and all together. No. It is the
rattling sound. The noise of cooler air
bristling through branches. It is like
a new being. A different animal. As if
each leave now had a shrunken meaner face
that could no longer murmur or smile
But grudgingly held on and scraped a sound
into the passing breeze until it excited
a vengeful gust to sweep it off and allow
it to drift onto the surface to wait out the
coming winter. You know the look now
After the whole mass of individual leaves had
screamed an alarm in dazzling color telling
every breathing thing that the end was near
That the cycle, that the sun, that the angle
of warmth would now turn away and bring
more darkness and cold and force all to
shelter and wait. So the look now is gray
And brown and half naked and starved
And the sounds are sharper and shrill and
the shadows stark and two-dimensional
Until mostly you don’t hear the trees at all
For the wind becomes a whistling thing
Without the happy smiling leaves to deflect it
It speeds on through howling in delight
The new master and mover of the universe
Where a cacophony of crickets once
held on to the night in a rhythmic chatter,
the random gusts now whiz and hiss and whistle
Like an opus for a dastard woodwind

..cont

Go to first message Go back 20 messages Messages 5313 - 5332 out of 6163 Go forward 20 messages Go to most recent message
Home
Back to the Top
Posts/page

Poetry

You can't post until you register. Come on, you'll never regret it. Join up!