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5864. Ulgine Barrows - 7/18/2007 9:02:59 AM

Didn't you think you were worth anything
See what you lost when you left this world, this sweet old world
See what you lost when you left this world, this sweet old world


~Lucinda Williams

5865. wabbit - 7/23/2007 3:28:48 PM

Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night

There was an old father of Dylan
Who was seriously, mortally illin'
"I want," Dylan said
"You to bitch till you're dead.
"I'll be cheesed if you kick it while chillin'."

Famous Poems Rewritten as Limericks

5866. arkymalarky - 7/23/2007 5:01:06 PM

Great link. Thanks!

5867. Ulgine Barrows - 7/25/2007 6:40:53 AM

wabbit, thanks. That made me snort.

5868. Ulgine Barrows - 7/25/2007 6:45:00 AM

there was a wabbit of mote
who posted a hip-hop note
the others who read it
continued to spread it
the wabbit of mote now is world-note

5869. Ulgine Barrows - 7/25/2007 8:32:43 AM

I want to know you
I want to show you
I want to grow you
Inside of me
I want to see you
I want to free you
I want to be you
Inside of me


Love me 50,000 miles beneath my brain
Love me 50,000 times and then again

Can you love me with a thousand eyes?
Can you see right through my bones?
Can you kiss me with a thousand lips?
Can you melt a solid stone?
Can you hear me from a thousand miles
When you're screaming at the stars?
Can you pull me up to Jupiter
When I'm all hung up on Mars?
Burn my eyes with your flame
Let your world spin free
Let it go, baby
I'll do the same

5870. Ulgine Barrows - 7/25/2007 8:33:34 AM

~ Ten Years After, oopsie

5871. Ulgine Barrows - 7/25/2007 8:40:17 AM

They took me down the grading station
And they classified me zed
'Cause of over population
They told me that I would soon be dead
But I slipped out of the force field
And hid beneath the monorail
But the automatic blood hounds
Lord, they're soon hot along my trail
Now if I had been a scholar
With computer working hard
Then my molecular structure
Would not be on the grader's card
So, I know that they will get me
Put my index in the brain
Then, the atoms of my body
Will be disposed of, Lordy, down the drain
They took me down the grading station
And they classified me zed
'Cause of over population
They told me that I would soon be dead

5872. Ulgine Barrows - 7/25/2007 8:42:59 AM

More 10 Years After, after what?

I almost went into a diatribe, but no, it is not the time nor place.

5873. Seamus - 7/27/2007 8:45:28 PM

Ulgine,

Thank you for Ten Years After.

I quite like that lyric, particularly this:

Can you hear me from a thousand miles
When you're screaming at the stars?
Can you pull me up to Jupiter
When I'm all hung up on Mars?
I don't think I've encountered Alvin Lee before. I appreciate the introduction.

5874. Seamus - 7/27/2007 9:01:14 PM

And wabbit, I liked that site as well. Thank you.

5875. Ulgine Barrows - 7/30/2007 9:57:44 AM

Lies, Lies

5876. arkymalarky - 7/30/2007 5:24:34 PM

Seamus, Jex linked a YouTube of him here: Message # 19785 in thread 155

5877. Macnas - 7/31/2007 8:56:42 AM

Seamus

Your Sister Agnes poem is deceptive. There's a lot of work in that I'd wager, I see Clarke in the structure.

Very pleasing to re-read, always the sign of a good one.

5878. Seamus - 8/1/2007 3:20:17 AM

Mac! Go raibh maith agat, a chara. I am honoured.

AC-like structure to it then?

I have been known to immediately think of "And O she was the Sunday in every week" upon seeing a beautiful woman pass by. Well, that, and other things anyway.

5879. Seamus - 8/1/2007 3:21:36 AM

arky, thanks for the link.

I'm with you on the lyric there, though.

5880. anomie - 8/1/2007 3:45:53 AM

A cousin just five years younger than me...he was 50 blew his brains out with a gun in the mouth. I guess there was a big clean up job.

I didn't now him well, but I knew about him, and I knew his sisters, my other cousins. He was a verytalentedperformer. He sang and played dirivative top 40 music. But to us he was a stunner. He could play "Blackbird" like you'd think it was John Lennon.

He had groupies. Can you believe, 50 year old groupies?

Pussy galore...from 30 to 50 year old pussy. Excuse me. But he had groupies.

50 years old, with groupies...blew his brains out.

His daughters are pissed. No life insurence for suicide. His sisters are bewildered, and wonder how much this is going to cost them.

I'm thinking....how rude. How f-ing inconsiderate! Use a bathtub fir Christ sake. Who pays for brains being swiped up from the car interior....or truck as ot were.

Pleae rednecks....put your guns up and use poisen or something.

I won't be going to the funeral. I like a lot more notice when someone makes a mess of himself.

5881. anomie - 8/1/2007 3:49:03 AM

I could not put those thoughts on our "family" web site. But I know there is a lot of anger. It's hard to feel sad about somene you're pissed at,even if its your dad.

5882. arkymalarky - 8/1/2007 5:16:10 PM

Every situation is different. But it's hard to judge, as Alistair put it, the hell in someone's head. I have two good friends who lost a parent to suicide (both friends were adults when it occurred). Both were tortured and suffering, one from chronic severe pain and debilitation and the other from profound depression. I knew the latter man well, and his end was incredibly tragic. He shot himself twice in the head with a shotgun (using his feet to fire it). All I could think was how much he must have suffered in death and how much he wanted to die. He left a mess his daughters had to clean up. And his wife, who was diabetic, had to have both legs amputated not long afterward. She died in a nursing home. These were not elderly people. She was in her early 60s. No one in the family was angry; they knew he was in a serious depression, and there was some guilt. They didn't know what to do and depended on their family physician, whom I blame more than anyone. He was not qualified to treat depression and didn't refer the family to someone who was. It was a downward spiral, not a condition of his life as a whole. In fact, he'd been a happy man when his daughter and I were young. They taught me to waterski.

There needs to be more care for mentally ill people. No one would think about not monitoring a diabetic or heart patient using specialists, but many mentally or emotionally ill patients are treated by general physicians using dangerous medicines that need to be monitored by specialists, and many health care plans don't even pay the same percent for mental illness, if it's covered at all. It's like if it's in your head, you really can help it and it's not legitimate illness, which is bullshit that costs lives and hurts countless people in addition to those who are ill.

My mother has chronic mental illness, but she thrives with good care and has since she was fourteen and my grandmother had the good sense and no embarrassment about sending her to a psychiatrist. Mom has had three nervous breakdowns, but she's now 71 and in good health and very happy. She loves life.

And it's zero of my business, but since you bring it up, if I didn't feel I should go, I wouldn't, but funerals are for the family, not the dead.

5883. anomie - 8/1/2007 7:10:59 PM

Yes, it's hard to imagine the kind of despair it takes to pull the trigger. You're right about funerals too I suppose. I think they're having just a non-religious scattering of ashes, and I haven't firmly decided whether to go. Some of the sentiments above are those of relatives to whom I've spoken.

I wish I knew him as 50 year-old. I keep thinking of the little boy I used to know.

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